Thursday, February 12, 2009

Famous person

My Mom is like a police that saves me from right or wrong
She is like a flower that blooms every minute
My mom is bright also the thunder in the sky
My mom is like the brain that makes a body Function
By Larolyn Fanas

Your smile is like a bird who found love
your steps make people feel like a dove
your like a fireman that light out the fire
you like the world who means alot to me
your like a teacher that teaches me what to do
all i can say is i love you too

1 comment:

Ms. Bentley said...

Very good poem Larylyn. I would like to see your add more metaphors to your poetry next time.